A new approach
Though im not sure if i liked this one or the origianl more, the original seemed to have more a beat structure compared to this one. THOUGH you did do a better job with the synth work in this one, if you were to combine the strengths of the two you would have a sweet version.
Hmm...alright. I'll work with it a bit when I go back to it. I've discovered new synths and everything since these ones as well so I'll probably improve the instrument selection.
The name fits
Good choice of track title it suited the type of synth you are using here, you had some good elements like the pads and transitions, though i would have added more to the syths, maybe a bit of layering or variety with them. Other than that good job
Thanks! Yeah I haven't gone back to this and worked on it yet. There will definitely be some changes though.
yikes
You gotta work on those levels man, theres stuff thats punching through WAAAY to hard. and at the 1:40 mark this start getting jarbled then when the kicks come it it turns into a nightmare, you either gotta eq this or turn stuff down. Other than that its a good track.
Club worthy
Now as you can see im a humble person, your the only one stopping me from that number one slot. And im going to give you some praise here. This is good, your production is top knotch and i like the contrast of harsh electronics with the soft vocals. That high synth is catchy as fuck and this song kicks...wait...STOMPS hard. Good job, im looking forward to more. 10/10 5/5
Ouch
This track is in needing of some EQC (Equalization Care). Instead of turning things up eq them, if you like bass this will work in your favor as it will get rid of alot of the muddling. With a bit of TLC in the track you could clean this up and trust me you'll be more pleased with it too.
I was messing with the equalizer when i got done with this just to see what it changed. but i just left it on a preset. But ill mess around with it again. Ty
HMM
Not really to much to judge here, you got a good start going though your direction could be interesting. Sounds good all around :)
thanks! i know my WIPs don't sound so good as the finished ones... they're just previews how it closely could sound like.
Neat
Hey not bad cover though i gotta ask....is this a MIDI cover? Or did you do this completly by ear? And is that a synth guitar? Sorry for the questions just curious. Goo work on the produsction end and the evil drones in the middle were a nice touch :)
I listened to the original and by ear recreated it as this. The guitar is a severely distorted square synth. Thank you for the reveiw!
-Lashmush
Not to bad
I really enjoyed the music and the vocals kind of remind me of En Esh a bit, though the synth guitar really did nothing for me, if possible get a real guitarist to record for this track. It would really balance things better i think. All and all good work :)
No way! :D Also, I can't edit my songs, since they're all done in one sprint. My maximum is mixing vocals or sound effects over the raw instrumental. FL Studio Demo has such restrictions that let only really good songs pass - ones that are worth all my freetime in a single day. :P
Mechanical
This reminds me of an army of machines or scenes from Terminator I like the drones and is that a vocal sample i hear? This has stong converter influence in here. Nothing negative to say FUCKIN EH!!!
I must admit, I don't listen to converter that much, but they're played in my noise radio sometimes. No vocals in there.
Alot better than mine
Man my first song sucked so bad it was barely considered music, you definatly did well in this one, its a bit repedative and the mixing is well still not so good the sounds were well chosen but i bet you already know how to improve this one ;)
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