Just Do it
Alright so you wanna know whats going on in here eh? A few things off the bat, the intro was good, i like the tribal drums and dark mood you create there, though you go into this odd kinda of techno lead that keeps repeating...that needs a bit more progression after it, a good rule of thumb for techno is add a change every 4 bars ;) breaks it up nicely. This song has a kind of This Morn Omina feel check them out, you have a similar kinda style. Also Add more OOMPH to your kicks they sound flat and kinda like they don't want to drive the song. All around decent production going on and a small tweak here and there. ALSO before i forget that lead synth you have going on layer another synth over top of it with the same pattern add a bif of delay to it and i can promise it will bring the song out more ;)